You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart portrays the number of visits to a community website in two consecutive
years
.
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Overall
, it can be seen that the number of monthly users fluctuated over the span of Linking Words
both
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years
, Use synonyms
however
, the second Linking Words
year
witnessed dramatic increases in figures compared to the previous Use synonyms
year
.
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To begin
with , numbers in the months September to February came across various changes in Linking Words
both
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years
, at the starting point the figures were quite identical with a slight advantage for the second Use synonyms
year
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similarly
, the next month Linking Words
also
saw close numbers with Linking Words
both
rising gradually , at Use synonyms
this
point Linking Words
both
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years
have reached the 5000 user milestone , Use synonyms
furthermore
, the coming of November saw a really high difference between the two , as for those visited in the first Linking Words
year
the number doubled at 10,000 users , Use synonyms
on the other hand
, second-Linking Words
year
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year
users reached almost 20,000 , the following month saw no shift for Use synonyms
both
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then
for that point until February a drop occurred for Linking Words
both
.
In the following period namely from March till July , more visitors started re-engaging with the website as a surge in numbers has been happening sitting at less than 5000 for the first Use synonyms
year
and 10,000 for the second and ending at under 15,000 and 25,000 respectively .Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, both, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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