You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart portrays the number of visits to a community website in two consecutive
years
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of monthly users fluctuated over the span of
both
years
,
however
, the second
year
witnessed dramatic increases in figures compared to the previous
year
.
To begin
with , numbers in the months September to February came across various changes in
both
years
, at the starting point the figures were quite identical with a slight advantage for the second
year
,
similarly
, the next month
also
saw close numbers with
both
rising gradually , at
this
point
both
years
have reached the 5000 user milestone ,
furthermore
, the coming of November saw a really high difference between the two , as for those visited in the first
year
the number doubled at 10,000 users ,
on the other hand
, second-
year
year
users reached almost 20,000 , the following month saw no shift for
both
and
then
for that point until February a drop occurred for
both
. In the following period namely from March till July , more visitors started re-engaging with the website as a surge in numbers has been happening sitting at less than 5000 for the first
year
and 10,000 for the second and ending at under 15,000 and 25,000 respectively .
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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