You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart portrays the number of visits to a community website in two consecutive
years
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Overall
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, it can be seen that the number of monthly users fluctuated over the span of
both
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years
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,
however
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, the second
year
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witnessed dramatic increases in figures compared to the previous
year
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.
To begin
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with , numbers in the months September to February came across various changes in
both
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years
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, at the starting point the figures were quite identical with a slight advantage for the second
year
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,
similarly
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, the next month
also
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saw close numbers with
both
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rising gradually , at
this
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point
both
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years
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have reached the 5000 user milestone ,
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, the coming of November saw a really high difference between the two , as for those visited in the first
year
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the number doubled at 10,000 users ,
on the other hand
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, second-
year
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year
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users reached almost 20,000 , the following month saw no shift for
both
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and
then
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for that point until February a drop occurred for
both
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. In the following period namely from March till July , more visitors started re-engaging with the website as a surge in numbers has been happening sitting at less than 5000 for the first
year
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and 10,000 for the second and ending at under 15,000 and 25,000 respectively .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, both, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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