at present education has been significantly commercialised in many parts of the world. it has positive or negative development ?
Education plays a vital role in one's growth and development , it is an asset for a person's personal and professional behaviour towards society. The window of opportunities is increased when the level of knowledge increases.
However
, in today's era learning systems become commercialised and institutes are opening at every knock corner. This
essay will discuss both pros and cons.
to commence with , commercialisation
has bought an element in the financial aspect of learning. people who have wealth can able to take admission in desire universities. For instance
, in past days competitive marks would be an asset to enter a favourable position whereas
, now pupils can get their choice of educational course in any university by landing some cash as a form of donation. Moreover
, commercialisation
has also
brought a change in student-teacher relationships before , teachers were equal to gods in past for students
,but in the modern ,world teachers are only treated as a service provider
for the money they give. If people spend money they can get a choice of tuition at home.The educational system leads to economic development in countries.
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On the other hand
,The value of education has considerably lost over the power of commercialisation
, it clearly shows the business of cash rather than acquiring knowledge. In addition
, many students
consider education as a better tool for higher-income jobs by sacrificing their passion. For example
, students
follow more powerful positions and jobs even if they are not interested in that field , instead
of following their passion. Commercialisation
has also
brought a massive change in the average student's life .For instance
, students
who are brilliant thus
, lack of money will affect them to get admission to their desirable institute.
to conclude
, commercialisation
has brought many changes in the learning system by increasing the rise in availability of learning to everyone but also
has not been beneficial to everybody.Submitted by joshiami7570 on
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