Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines Does this development bring more advantage or disadvantage

It is a fact that

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the physical efforts in houses are replaced by technical

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

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. The benefits like

time saving

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by

such

advanced technologies are far more than the drawbacks. There are

few

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disadvantages, which can bring up by the development of

machineries

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machinery

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in households in terms of energy consumption. To illustrate, the excess usage of

such

items can lead to huge electricity use in peak hours and there will be huge demand.

Hence

there will be more energy production and that creates pollution by burning

lot

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of fossil fuels

as well as

surging energy prices.

On the other hand

,

such

instruments can be beneficial and comfortable for mankind in many ways.

Firstly

, it will reduce the physical strain which

need

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to take to complete the

works

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in a home. To explain, cleaning floors and laundry were an herculean task in

early

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days, and people got exhausted after doing

such

jobs. But after the arrival of vacuum cleaners and washing machines, it became easy to handle

such

situations. Apart from that, the technologies saved lots of

time

in daily life which

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to be used fruitfully . It took several hours to finish certain tasks in houses ,

thus

it caused mental stress in people.

Whereas

these jobs are handed over to mechanical

house holds

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households

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and now they can spend leisure

time

with family by watching movies and reading books.,

Furthermore

the perfection and convenience

offers

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by these facilities cannot attain by

hands

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.

For example

, the utensils and plates after a meal can be cleaned in a dishwasher and the result will be better than human effort. In conclusion, the usage of

such

devices for hose jobs can bring several advantages in terms of relief from manual work , providing extra

time

as well as

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satisfaction.The only disadvantage of

such

development is high usage in critical