You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the amount of emitted
carbon
dioxide
per person in four countries (United
Kingdom
, Sweden, Italy , and Portugal) which were emitted over 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
.
Overall
, the emissions of the United
Kingdom
and Sweden decreased over the period given,
while
for Italy and Portugal, they increased.
It is clear that
the United
Kingdom
produced the most CO2 emissions,
whereas
Portugal was the least. With regards to the amount of emitted
carbon
dioxide
in the United
Kingdom
, it began at around 11 metric
tonnes
and
then
fell slightly to about 9 metric
tonnes
in the
last
year
.
Likewise
, approximately 8 metric
tonnes
of
carbon
dioxide
in Sweden was produced in the first
year
and
then
peaked at around 10 metric
tonnes
in around 1978 before plummeting dramatically to about 6 metric
tonnes
in the
last
year
.
On the other hand
, the emissions of
carbon
dioxide
in Italy started in 1967 at about 4 metric
tonnes
and
then
reached a peak at around 8 metric
tonnes
in 1997 and remained stable until 2007.
Similarly
, about 1
mettric
Correct your spelling
metric
tonnes
Change to a singular noun
tonne
show examples
of
carbon
dioxide
in Portugal was produced in the first
year
after which the figure rapidly went up and hit a peak at around 5 metric
tonnes
in 1997 and levelled off until 2007.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, kingdom, tonnes, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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