You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates the hospital
admissions
for different five hospitals in European
country
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
show examples
( Fortsmith, Adlin,Stanton , Bradley,
oxley
Change the capitalization
Oxley
show examples
)
from
Change preposition
between
show examples
2004 and 2018
Overall
,it is obvious all the hospital
admissions
for hospitals increased,
while
Oxley
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
had declined in the
last
year. At the start of the period,
Oxley
was the most popular ,but
in over of
Change preposition
during
show examples
the period
become
Wrong verb form
became
show examples
least popular.
With regards
Change preposition
Regards
show examples
to the amount of
Oxley
was the highest hospital
admissions
with just under 250 in 2004 and
then
admissions
for
Oxley
decreased sharply to nearly 100 in the final year.
On the other hand
, when it comes to
Bardley
Correct your spelling
Bradley
was the second highest with about 200 in 2007 , which reached a high of just over 250 in 2016.
Likewise
, approximately 100 of Adlin in the first year after which move upward to 250 in
the
Change the article
apply
show examples
2016. As for Stanton were roughly 80 .
Then
, it rose considerably to about 250 over
this
fourteen-year period.
Submitted by s_syedy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words admissions, oxley with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: