You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line graph illustrates the hospital
admissions
for different five hospitals in European country
( Fortsmith, Adlin,Stanton , Bradley, Fix the agreement mistake
countries
oxley
) Change the capitalization
Oxley
from
2004 and 2018
Change preposition
between
Overall
,it is obvious all the hospital admissions
for hospitals increased, while
Oxley
which
had declined in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
last
year. At the start of the period,Oxley
was the most popular ,but in over of
the period Change preposition
during
become
least popular.
Wrong verb form
became
With regards
to the amount of Change preposition
Regards
Oxley
was the highest hospital admissions
with just under 250 in 2004 and then
admissions
for Oxley
decreased sharply to nearly 100 in the final year.
On the other hand
, when it comes to Bardley
was the second highest with about 200 in 2007 , which reached a high of just over 250 in 2016. Correct your spelling
Bradley
Likewise
, approximately 100 of Adlin in the first year after which move upward to 250 in the
2016. As for Stanton were roughly 80 . Change the article
apply
Then
, it rose considerably to about 250 over this
fourteen-year period.Submitted by s_syedy on
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