The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise it.
The line graph illustrates changes in
working
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the working
age
of adults in France, United
States, Japan,Correct article usage
the United
Germany
over the period of ninety Correct word choice
and Germany
years
from 1960 to 2050.
As seen from the graph in Japan in the first twenty years
the age
was only increasing. However
the Add a comma
,However
number
significantly decreased to the
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apply
fiftyfive
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fifty-five
fifty five
years
from 1980 to 2020 and it continued to fall for the next thirty years
resulting in the age
of fiftyone
.Correct your spelling
fifty-one
fifty one
On the other hand
after facing some fluctuations for the first fifty years
the age
in France climbed to sixtyfive
from Correct your spelling
sixty five
sixty-five
sixtythree
. Correct your spelling
sixty-three
sixty three
Then
it unfortunately went into nosedive to the age
of fiftyseven
in 2050.
in 1960 the Correct your spelling
fifty-seven
fifty seven
age
of working was ranked the lowest to the
sixty Correct article usage
apply
percent
in the United States. For the following twenty Change the spelling
per cent
years
the Add a comma
,years
number
slightly went up to the sixtysix
. Correct your spelling
sixty-six
sixty six
Nevertheless
, after all those increasments
the Correct your spelling
increases
increments
number
dramatically fell to sixty in 2040 and remained steady for the nest
decade.From 1960 to 1970 the Correct your spelling
next
age
of workers in germany
decreased Change the capitalization
Germany
for
ten Change preposition
by
percents
.Indeed the Fix the agreement mistake
percent
number
plunged to seventy in 2020 being the highest rate among other
three countries.After Correct article usage
the other
that
it dramatically sank to Add a comma
,that
fifty five
in 2050.
Add a hyphen
fifty-five
Overall
,between 1960 and 2050 only the age
of workers from United
States remained untouched.Other countries' ages Correct article usage
the United
decresed
.Correct your spelling
decreased
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