the table shows the proportions of pupil attending four secondary school types

the table shows the proportions of pupil attending four secondary school types
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The table chart depicts the information regarding the ratio of students who attended four various types of secondary schools from 2000 to 2009. First of all, the percentage of voluntary-controlled academy learners was higher than other institutes which was recorded more than half in 2000, but it dropped suddenly to a fifth in 2009.
However
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, community
school
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admission started at around 12% in 2000.
Then
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, there had been a sharp rise and student admissions reached up to 58% in 2009. Post of
this
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, the ratio of specialist
school
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learners was approximately 12% in 2000. After that, it went down to almost one in ten in 2009.
Although
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grammar institute pupils began to more than a fifth in starting year, it decreased significantly to just above 10% in 2009.
overall
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, the ratio of voluntary-controlled
school
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pupils was higher than in other
school
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students at the start of the period. But,
at the end
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of
this
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, community schools had more learners.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • secondary school
  • independent school
  • grammar school
  • specialist school
  • pupil enrollment
  • trend
  • regional variation
  • socio-economic status
  • educational outcomes
  • parental preference
  • academic achievement
  • government policy
  • funding
  • attendance rates
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