the graph shows the number of oversea visitors in three different areas in European countries between 1987-2007.

the graph shows the number of oversea visitors in three different areas in European countries between  1987-2007.
The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of areas in European nations ( the coast, the
mountains
, and the lakes) which were visited over 20 years from 1987 to 2007. Until are measured in thousands.
Overall
, the
visitors
to the coast, the
mountains
, and the lakes increased over the period given. At the start of the period, the coast was the most popular area, which was replaced by the
mountains
from 1987 to 2007, and following that the lakes became the most preferred place to go. With regards to the number of coastal
visitors
, it began at around 40
thousand
and
then
it increased to reach nearly 75
thousand
in the final year.
Likewise
, almost 20
thousand
visitors
visited the
mountains
in 1987, and
then
the number of
visitors
rose to reach just over 30
thousand
in 2007.
On the other hand
, the number of
visitors
to the lake made up 20
thousand
in the beginning and
then
it peaked at 75
thousand
in 2002 before falling to reach 50
thousand
in the
last
year.
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