the graph shows the number of oversea visitors in three different areas in European countries between 1987-2007.

the graph shows the number of oversea visitors in three different areas in European countries between  1987-2007.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of areas in European nations ( the coast, the
mountains
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, and the lakes) which were visited over 20 years from 1987 to 2007. Until are measured in thousands.
Overall
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, the
visitors
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to the coast, the
mountains
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, and the lakes increased over the period given. At the start of the period, the coast was the most popular area, which was replaced by the
mountains
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from 1987 to 2007, and following that the lakes became the most preferred place to go. With regards to the number of coastal
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, it began at around 40
thousand
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and
then
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it increased to reach nearly 75
thousand
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in the final year.
Likewise
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, almost 20
thousand
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visitors
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visited the
mountains
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in 1987, and
then
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the number of
visitors
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rose to reach just over 30
thousand
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in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the number of
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to the lake made up 20
thousand
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in the beginning and
then
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it peaked at 75
thousand
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in 2002 before falling to reach 50
thousand
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in the
last
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year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mountains, visitors, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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