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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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It has been recently recommended that since
people
 can buy similar
products
 anywhere
throught
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throughout
through
 the
world
countries
 are becoming similar too. In fact, I believe that
this
 can be
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characterised
characterized
 as more of positive development rather than
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one
. On the
one
 hand, it is generally argued that the trend of
buy
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same
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 things and becoming similar around
countries
 is more negative. For
one
,
people
 may not have any willings in order to buy national
products
 . With that in mind, it might bring
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huge damage to the economy of
country
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. Another factor is that
,
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 it has
negative
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 impact
to
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 culture. To put it differently, each product of companies of different
countries
 is manufactured for their own public and lifestyle. A case in point,
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 clothes of some cultures may
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another
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 culture as there are
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nations
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, religions and thoughts. Having said that, I believe becoming similar and buying
same
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products
 throughout the
world
also
 offers major advantages. First of all, if
people
 are able to buy the same things around the
world
 it can cause the development of import and export. Another fundamental reason has to do
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 the fact that if there are several types of
one
 product it might boost the profit among companies since they compete
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 other in order to increase and keep clients.
Moreover
,
people
 have
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 to choose the best product.
To sum up
, it is undeniable that there are some negatives for
countries
that
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people
 are buying similar
products
 anywhere in the
world
, that said, I think it has
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 positive impact considering their role in developing
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the
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economic growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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