some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There has been a public debate about whether to get a job or continue their education.

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essay will elaborate on both angles of

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highly contentious view at issue, and from my perspective, they are equally important. Let's start by looking at the advantages of keep studying at

university

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or college. First of all, the most obvious

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is gaining specific knowledge. On top of that we have to mention

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academic ability because there are many professions requiring specific

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such

as doctor,

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and lawyer

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lawyer

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.

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kinds of

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that have

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to be learned in the

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college

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of the foremost impacts is that they have to self-study,

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their knowledge in a specific field. A good example to explain

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is that every developed

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like Japan,

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and China

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consist their courses

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based after school. In

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way, their youth continue their study after that they become

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.

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, we need to make our

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experts towards in

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specialized

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field.

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plays an important role in social development.

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, inventing a cure

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coronaviruts

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coronavirus

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would

be impossible

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if

its founders never studied after school.

On the other hand

, some people believe in direct working.

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of those

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advantages

is they work the more soft-skill they get, so these people will have more experience in working compared to the

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the same age.

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artists do not require a college diploma or entrepreneurs and learn by trying and marking a lot of mistakes. In conclusion, there are several benefits both in future study and going straight to work. From my perspective, learning at university is the best solution. It seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond

school

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the school

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level.