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some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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There has been a public debate about whether to get a job or continue their education.
This
 essay will elaborate on both angles of
this
 highly contentious view at issue, and from my perspective, they are equally important. Let's start by looking at the advantages of keep studying at
university
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a university
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 or college. First of all, the most obvious
one
 is gaining specific knowledge. On top of that we have to mention
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academic ability because there are many professions requiring specific
academic
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academics
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such
 as doctor,
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and lawyer
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lawyer
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.
Thus
,
there
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 kinds of
curriculum
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have
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that have
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 to be learned in the
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college
.
One
 of the foremost impacts is that they have to self-study,
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 their knowledge in a specific field. A good example to explain
this
 is that every developed
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 like Japan,
China
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and China
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 consist their courses
reasearch
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research
 based after school. In
this
 way, their youth continue their study after that they become
professional
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professionals
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.
Secondly
, we need to make our
educate
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 experts towards in
speciaziled
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specialized
 in
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 field.
This
 plays an important role in social development.
For instance
, inventing a cure
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coronaviruts
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coronavirus
coronaviruses
wuold
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would
 be impossible
isf
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if
 its founders never studied after school.
On the other hand
, some people believe in direct working.
One
 of those
advanteges
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advantages
 is they work the more soft-skill they get, so these people will have more experience in working compared to the
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in
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the same age.
For example
,
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artists do not require a college diploma or entrepreneurs and learn by trying and marking a lot of mistakes. In conclusion, there are several benefits both in future study and going straight to work. From my perspective, learning at university is the best solution. It seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond
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the school
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 level.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Academic qualifications
  • Specialized skills
  • In-depth knowledge
  • Personal growth
  • Social development
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • Career progression
  • Professional networking
  • Education
  • Work experience
  • Successful career
  • Personal interests
  • Career goals
  • Decision-making process
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