some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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believe

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that the lessen number of specific animals and plants become the major issues in

environment

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,

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others say that there are more

signicant

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significant

problems.

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essay will present both opinions and I will deliver my perspective. On one hand, it is true that the disappearance of rare animals and plants become

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of environmental

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. The proponent of

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that the shift of climate changes have influenced the disruption of animal habitat and flora ecosystems. The lack of raining numbers in dry regions in the world, as the impact of global warming had caused the limitation of water supply

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the forest,

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then

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cut off the food supply for living animals. And

following

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, the

lessen

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number

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flora species is mainly because of the lack of soil quality and the expansion of dry seasons.

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, the heat temperature had burned the major of rain

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in tropical regions, which

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become original habitats for rare plantations.

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issue

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stated that the main reasons

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environmental disasters are mainly because

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irresponsibility

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of human activities

such

as illegal

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logging

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, the expansion of

agriculture

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areas, and plastic

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. Forests have become the main source of oxygen supply for the people living

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the earth, illegal lodging and the

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of

agriculture

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palm oil expansion are the most reasons for causing the climate shifts and global warming.

In addition

, the unstoppable spread of plastic

litters

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around the globe is damaging

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natures

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, especially the oceans and land main

water ways

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and lakes in the land.

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, it had tightened the underwater inhabitants to grow by poisoning their ecosystems.

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while

the biggest deal in environmental issues

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by the

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rates of flora and fauna, despite

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that, some still believe the damages caused by

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and waste

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become the major reasons

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this

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