Tourism has emerged as one of the biggest industries of this decade, but its disadvantages cannot be overlooked. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Some people assert that even though tourism has been one of the largest sectors, its disadvantages cannot be ignored. I strongly agree with
this
belief for two key reasons. Linking Words
Firstly
, it would lead to environmental damages which seriously impact local inhabitants and Linking Words
secondly
, infrastructures would be congested which means locals cannot use them easily.
The primary reason I agree is that tourists negatively affect local environments resulting in a lack of inhabitants including endangered species. Linking Words
For instance
, travellers often visit prohibited areas where authorities aim to protect natural habitats. Linking Words
This
causes the unfavourable situation that they would suffer or be endangered. In fact, recent research conducted by The University of Tokyo revealed that a variety of wild animals in Japan faced Linking Words
such
dangers, as numerous tourists did not follow local regulations which focus on preserving them. Linking Words
Therefore
, the growth of the tourist industry triggers an adverse influence on countries.
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Further
support for my perspective is that congested public transportation resulting from tourists would lead to inconvenience for local people. These can include trains, metro systems, and buses. Linking Words
According to
an article in the Asahi Shimbun newspaper, residents in Kyoto struggle with using buses Linking Words
due to
the fact that travellers occupy them. Linking Words
This
suggests that the above-mentioned situation forces them to spend additional hours to reach their destinations. Linking Words
Thus
, tourism brings another noticeable disadvantage which governments should consider seriously.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that drawbacks caused by tourism should not be ignored, since they unfavourably impact local nature and citizens. Linking Words
In particular
, it could lead to the limitation of precious inhabits and inconvenience of people using public transportation.Linking Words
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