The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
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charts give information about the Correct your spelling
pie
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
people
affected by different
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a different
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
noise
in Europe by day
and by night
in both urban and rural areas in 2007. The data is measured in millions for traffic
, train
, aircraft
and industry
.
Overall
, it is clear that
there were
a Change the verb form
was
drammatic
increase Correct your spelling
dramatic
of
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in
traffic
noise
both at
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apply
day
and night
, while
people
were not affected by train
, aircraft
and industry
a lot in cities. The number of people
affected by traffic
noise
in rural areas uptook considerably by night
and by day
, while
there was not any noise
by industry
.
Looking at the details, well over 50 and 60 million people
affected
by Add a missing verb
are affected
traffic
by day
and by night
respectively, which showing
the highest number in the group. Wrong verb form
shows
However
, the noise
of train
decreased sharply to 10 by Fix the agreement mistake
trains
day
and 8 by night
correspondingly. The index of aircraft
and industry
noise
possesed
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possessed
lowest
position in the group with 4 (Correct article usage
the lowest
day
), 1 (night
) and 1(day
), 0.25(night
) accordingly
in 2007.
The number of people
who were affected by noise
in rural areas made up 34 by day
, while
it declined by 10 by night
. There were a noticable
decline Correct your spelling
noticeable
of
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in
train
to 8 and 6, Add an article
the train
a train
aircraft
to 2 and 1 by day
and night
accordingly
, while
people
did not affect by industry
in Correct article usage
the countrysides
countrysides
of Europe in 2007.Fix the agreement mistake
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