People have to spend more and more time to travel from their homes for jobs and study. What are the reason? How can we solve this problem?

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are

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being definitely spent

for

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the

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personal and social activities

such

as study and work by

people

.

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essay

aim

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to solve the problems behind

this

situation and

olso

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also

suggest possible ways to alleviate

this problems

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.

Most

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obvious reason is that roads are very congested.

Additionally

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number of the vehicles

are

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increasing.

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Because nowadays

virtually all of the

people

of today have private transport. Because

of

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the

private

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cars are increasing, Public transport

do

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their own work overdue.

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situation

organize

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the

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most of the traffics. Especially on time that everyone

travel

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travels

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to

the

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study and jobs

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chock-a-block with tailback. And

this

is

very

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bad case. The solutions are not easy. But everyone

need

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to join it. And they want to find

about

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this

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problems.

one

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of the

solution

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is that if the government organize the park and

ride

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,

this

problem would

less

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.

Becouse

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Because

people

drive their private cars to

the

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destination and continue the rest of the way on foot or by public transport.

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the problem would

partially

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solved.

On the other

hand

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people

should be motivated to do carpooling by having high occupancy vehicle lanes, only those cars, which are fully occupied, are allowed to move on

such

lanes, because of which the traffic on these lanes moves faster.

Such

a system is being used very successfully in many parts of

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USA.

To sum up

, it is undeniable that commuting time has increased, but many steps can be taken to ameliorate the situation