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People nowadays tend to give birth at early age Do the advantages outweighs the disadvantages

#people #birth #age
In
this
 present world,some people are likely to have
their
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kids
as at
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when they’re old.
Although
,
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having
kids
 at old age comes with some problems,it helps the
parents
 to
train
 their
children
 well and they are
also
 able to provide for all the needs of their
children
 which I believe outweighs the disadvantages because the problems can be solved with adequate medical care. Having
children
 at an old age helps the
parents
 to
train
 the
kids
 with discipline.Older
parents
 tend to
train
kids
 better than young
parents
.Training of
kids
requiresparents
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requires parents
 that are mentally stable because it comes with lots of challenges.From research,older
guardians
 are more mentally stable than young
guardians
 because they have been through so many things in life.So they
train
 their
kids
 based on experience which
also
 helps them to build mentally stable
offsprings
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.
Also
,giving birth late helps
parents
 to be able to provide for all the needs of their
kids
.Most people become financially stable in their late age,which helps them to have all they need to take care of their
kids
.Taking care of
kids
 requires having enough money.
For instance
,they have to pay their fees,buy food and clothes for the
children
.Young
guardians
 might not find it easy to pay the bills because they’re still struggling to get cash.
Although
 there are
also
 young
guardians
 that are financially stable
but
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there are few because most people between ages 20-30 are always still struggling to get funds. In conclusion,It is important to have
children
 at the right time when there is enough time and money to cater
and
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train
 the
kids
.
Instead
 of struggling
together with
 the
kids
 and exposing them to suffering
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