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People nowadays tend to have children at older age Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage

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Nowadays,
people
 tend to give birth at an older age.
This
 might be
due to
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the emotionally
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emotionally
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 preparation of the parents for the process,
however
, delay in the ability to conceive can
also
 be
disadvantage
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a disadvantage
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 which I believe
outweigh
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outweighs
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 the disadvantages which can be medically corrected.
Firstly
, many
people
 nowadays believe that
child birth
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childbirth
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 and child care
is
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 not a small deal,
that is
 why some
people
 want to prepare either emotionally or financially towards having their
children
.
For instance
, I once had a
neighbor
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 who was a man at the age of 35 and still not married, so I asked him one day
that
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apply
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what was his reason for that and he said he doesn’t want his wife or
children
lack
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 anything whatsoever and that it’s after he made it by having a house and a car with
steady
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 income and most
people
 importantly he wanted to be emotionally ready to have a child and get married till he
do
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 so, which I think it’s a good idea
due to
 the fact that he wanted to be emotionally grounded before heading into it.
However
,
inability
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the inability
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 of the woman to conceive can be a great emotional stress and
also
 causes depression
on
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a
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the
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 long run, but
this
 can be corrected in some ways.
For example
, I once had a patient who was not able to get pregnant for five years of marriage, many texts
was
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 done on both the wife and her husband which all came out good but was still not able to have a baby. Later on, the physician suggested surrogacy which came out well and they had a twin. So,
this
 can be corrected medically. In conclusion,
although
 giving birth at an older age can be risky
or
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due to
 some medical issues, I believe the advantage
supersede
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 the disadvantage because it reduces
stress
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the stress
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 of coping with
children
 and
also
 to Cater for their
children
. 320 words 1hr15mins
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