People nowadays tend to have children at older age .Do the advantages outweighed the disadvantage.

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Recently, couples are likely to make offspring later in life, having children at mature age might cause health issues and some problems for the
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and the
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, unlike giving birth at a tender stage when you will have good health to take care of the baby, on
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I think demerit outweigh the merit.
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, older people are likely to have children with congenital abnormality and the
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is likely to have a complication which is eclampsia. if the
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is not properly monitored they may lose both
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and the
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.older people may not be able to give birth on their own and
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may lead to caesarian section, and if care is not taken the baby may have fetal distress and these can affect the brain of the
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. More so what is now the essence of giving birth when the
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will not be healthy nor will be able to present the
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to society? So I think to reduce all these difficulties is better to start bearing babies when you are stable than older age when you will not have the ability to care for the
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.
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, I think having children at a tender stage reduces maternal death, and deformity because a young adult can withstand stress and can be treated easily unlike older people who can not undergo any stress and they will need special attention when making offspring. In summary, I think Demerit outweighs the merit in the sense that having a healthy
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is far better than having kids at a mature age when the
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may cause danger to the parent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Delaying parenthood
  • Biological clock
  • Financial stability
  • Emotional maturity
  • Health risks
  • Opportunity cost
  • Weighing the pros and cons
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