Today more people are overweight than before.what in your opinion are the primary cause of this? What are the main effect of this epidemic?

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that people now weigh more than they use to.

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their inactive

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and

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of processed foods which had increased the rate of morbidity and mortality.

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essay will explain these with relevant examples and a logical conclusion Will be drawn. On the one hand,

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, the recent attitudes of

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who prefer not to work, always

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with little exercise and activity trend to

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down for a

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period of

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, eating, drinking and sleeping all through the day.

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,

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who are working class citizens but whose job description requires prolong sitting for a

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period without having

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to take a break and always try to meet up with

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.,the only spare

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is for them to eat and drink.

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leads to the accumulation of

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in the organs of the body.

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, individuals especially women who rank highest in obesity statistics from leading a sedentary lifestyle primarily accumulate

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fast from being a

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the opportunity of sleeping and eating

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the majority of the day

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who consume fast

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junks which

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high in Sodium and sugar tend to gain weight fast and uncontrollably leading to obesity.

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of men do not cook but would rather prefer to buy can

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products because it is considered to be faster and quicker to consume without taking steps to burn out the accumulated sodium.

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writing class

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who drive to work, get there and sit for prolonged hours,

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back home after the

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job get to their home tired with having the only option of eating junk

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. They do

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virtually every day without writing out

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leading to increase weight gain.

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, the detrimental effect of losing oneself continuously with processed meals is the increase in morbidity and death rate. The disease acquired from excess can

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consumption and secretary lifestyle ranges from diabetes, hypertension,

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which is the accumulation of fat in the arteries

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diabetes and hypertension

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from excess sugar and sodium intake from packaged products.

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when

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illness

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not treated on

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death which is the eventual outcome occurs.

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statistics from

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for disease control and

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showed that mortality from inedible

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consumption which

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preventable rank highest. In conclusion, inactivity and junk

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are the main factors responsible for obesity and terminal illness with eventual sudden death as the prognosis.