In the contemporary
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make a decent living.To me not only does
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impact on countries economy,but
also
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sphere
and I will develop
this
idea in subsequent paragraphs.
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issue and preventive measures to tackle
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To begin
with, insufficient salaries and low standards of living seem to have been the main reasons why nowadays
people
relocate from agricultural centres to urban
cities
.Youngsters are driven by the vision of better life and
therefore
they step out of their comfort zone and move to a big
city
.Moving to
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city
for educational purposes is
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major reason why
people
leave their small towns.
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survey conducted by
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journalist revealed that 70% of
people
who moved from agricultural
cities
to
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are students who are in
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of obtaining higher education.
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but not least success in
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sphere
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leverage which
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people
from
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and bustle of the
city
.
So,what needs to be done to prevent
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collapse and decline of
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sphere
? From my standpoint the responsibility for
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the agricultural
sphere
and agricultural
cities
,the fewer
people
will feel
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to move from the
city
.New work
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should be opened and
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market should be developed in
such
cities
so that
people
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without leaving
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.Improving
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system and school curriculum is
also
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part of agricultural policy.
To sum up
,there are several factors that
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people
leave their homes and relocate to bigger
cities
due to
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and educational reasons.
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sectors government can contribute
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sphere
and
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of
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individuals.