The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The two pie charts illustrate the different
scales
of the retail sector
in online shopping (Electronics and Appliances, Home Furnishings, Food and Beverage, and Video
Games
) in Canada
percentage-wise for the years 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, at the beginning of the period, Video
Games
contributed the least to the online shopping scales
in Canada
, while
Electronics and Appliances was the most significant sector
. In comparison, by the end of the period, Food and Beverage became the largest among all retail sectors. and the lowest contribution was made by video
games
.
In 2005, the Video
Games
sector
accounted for 18% of Canada
's online shopping scales
. However
, by 2010, it experienced a significant decrease to only 5%.
On the other hand
, Food and Beverage constituted 22% of online shopping scales
in 2005 and saw a slight decline to 10% in 2010. While
Home Furnishings comprised a quarter of Canada
's online shopping scales
in 2005, it fell to 5% in 2010. On the other hand
, the Electronics and Appliances sector
was at 35% but decreased by 5% after a ten-year period.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words scales, sector, video, games, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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