The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Some argue that the optimal solution for
transportation
is to incentivise citizens to live in cities
instead
of the outer area or the countryside. I strongly disagree with this
viewpoint as this
would require Correct article usage
an advance
advance
Replace the word
advanced
transportation
system
and can lead to severe environmental pollution and social problems.
The opponents may argue that when citizens live in cities
more than in the countryside, the need for commuting will decrease. However
, they should take into account that this
solution will require cities
to improve their public transportation
system
, which not all cities
can afford. Take, for instance
, before Bangkok can
encourage Wrong verb form
could
people
to live in the city
central area, they had to build an effective Change noun form
city's
system
for
Change preposition
of
transportation
means that consisted of a myriad of vehicles such
as skytrains
and buses, which involved a significant time and money to develop, build and operate
Correct your spelling
strains
On the other hand
, while
people
can reduce their need for travel when they live in cities
, the large number of citizen
will strain the environment and cause more problems. The reason is that as the population Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
increase
, the number of garbage and trash will grow Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
accordingly
, putting a heavy burden on the enviroment
. Correct your spelling
environment
For example
, with a population of 8 million people
, Hanoi is estimated to have to process 100 tons of trash everyday
, Replace the word
every day
making
the urban sanitation Verb problem
putting
system
under constant pressure in order to keep the city clean.
In conclusion, while
incentivising people
to leave
in central Correct your spelling
live
cities
areas can reduce the need for travel, Fix the agreement mistake
city
this
solution will involve significant funds to improve the
public Correct article usage
apply
transportation
and cause more pollution for the environment. Therefore
, I strongly disagree with this
viewpoint.Submitted by tieuvuphuonghoa on
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