You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter: say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam..........,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to cancel the part-time stock market course.
I am Jaskaran Singh Awal, and my registration number is 0000.
Last
week, I registered for a part-time stock market course which is starting on the 1st of January. To be more specific, the program is beginner's level, and it will start next Monday.
However
, due to
some unforeseen circumstances, I will have to go out of Delhi for 2 months. Therefore
, I will not be able to take classes, and thus
, I want to cancel it with a full refund. If possible, please provide a refund of the tax amount as well.
As per your college website, there is another full-time stock market course which will start on the 20th of April. Could you please get me registered for it? However
, I will pay the total fees through cash so please do not adjust it with the above refund.
Awaiting your prompt reply.
Yours Faithfully,
Jaskaran Singh AwalSubmitted by KaranAwal15 on
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coherence cohesion
Expand on the reason for cancellation and provide more details.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the logical flow of ideas and provide clear transitions between paragraphs.
lexical resource
Enrich the vocabulary used in the letter.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and vary sentence structures.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite