Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to gentically modified crops to increase the productions of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.

In our constantly changing world, it seems that the growth of
population
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in advanced countries is increasing rapidly as well. Some
people
feel that it will be
more wise
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to use
gentically
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genetically
processed products, to rise the
productions
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production
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of
food
grains. In
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I will examine what could be the benefits and
draw backs
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drawbacks
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of
such
a decision
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and will explain why I strongly believe that the advantages uprise the disadvantages. It is true that
as a result
of many factors that
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our world
such
as climate change, and inflation
for example
, some steps should be taken immediately to help the
food
industry
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the challenges
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involved with the fast growth of our society,
However
, by doing so, 2 main issues will create a direct affect on the majority of
people
. The first one is by consuming
gentically
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genetically
processed
food
,
can
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health problems can
occure
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occur
, since
this
type of
food
is not natural. In the UK
for example
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research that had proven a direct increase
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people
who started consuming
food
that
contain
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gentically
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genetically
processed crops.
Moreover
,
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the
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reduction
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farmers
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employment, like in India, where a lot of
people
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in that field, and they can lose everything they have worked so hard for.
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contrast, the benefits from
this
change, can't be
overlookd
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overlooked
in my opinion. Inserting
such
food
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can help with diminishing
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the stravation
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stravation
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starvation
phenomenon globally.
Furthermore
, In populations that
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increasingly fast like in
third world
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countries,
as
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Africa,
people
will never have to worry again if they will be left without
food
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because no one will be
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on the crops industry.
In addition
,
This
type of
food
will be cheaper and it will help to reduce living costs in time of rising prices in every field of life. In conclusion, global
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growth is a problem that should be addressed in many terms,
however
facing
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the fact that soon we will all face with shortage of
food
is a dangerous problem that
shold
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should
be solved immediately. I believe that using
food
that was
gentically
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genetically
created is the best solution that mankind
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at the moment, even if there are some drawbacks, we must see the
biger
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picture in
this
case.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Genetically modified (GM) crops
  • Higher yields
  • Pest and disease resistance
  • Nutritional benefits
  • Agricultural inputs
  • Environmental impact
  • Biodiversity
  • Health concerns
  • Economic dependency
  • Biotechnology companies
  • Ethical concerns
  • Cultural resistance
  • Malnutrition
  • Food demands
  • Crossbreed
  • Unintended effects
  • Regulatory assessments
  • Enhanced resistance
  • Agricultural sustainability
  • Sovereignty over agriculture
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