The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.

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of Vietnam in France, Russia and America. The data was measured in millions from 2000 and 2015.

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of students

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France and America increased dramatically over the period shown.

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for Russia witnessed a slow decline. Regarding the line graph, the number of pupils in Vietnam for America increase strikingly from nearly 1.5 to 5 between 2000 and 2015 and

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was the greatest in the group.

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the number of students in France decreased from 3.5

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2.5 in a half-decade. After

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grew sharply till

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year with about 4.5. The amount of

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in Russia experienced a slow drop from 3 to nearly 2 for a decade. In the following 5 years, the

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increased marginally till nearly 2.5 in the final year and

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