you are going to another country to study. you would like to do a part time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part time job a suggest how your friend could help find a job

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Dear Samantha
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just writing to let you know that
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moving to
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in September to start my
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degree.
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want to take my
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degree at Monash University for two years.
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be studying marketing a few modules on online advertising because
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know that the program has good lessons.
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know it sounds super boring, but
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can,
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need to complete the course before
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can get i role in a marketing office. Talking about life in Australia,
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think
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going to take a
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job to help pay my living cost and rent
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studying
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here. As you know, my
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is not good, so
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need a job that really helps me to improve my speaking and my listening skill. would you be able to help me to find
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job through the local newspaper there? or you can email me a list of the newspaper that advertise jobs in your area.
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, you can put a good word in for me with the owner of the cafe where you work in. all the best. Dego.
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