In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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misbehavior

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problem that teachers are facing in schools

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with high school students.

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essay will discuss the reasons

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issue and give solutions to get over

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problem. First and foremost , with the advent of technology and

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, everything has been easily accessed including violent films and tv shows. Youngsters are getting more and more unpredictable as the days pass because of the influence that they are getting from those series which include violence, bullying and

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content.

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the second reason could be

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generation’s easy access to cigarettes ,drugs and drinks from an early age.

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teenagers can be exposed to coercion from their families. Adolescents can be very stubborn to behave

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their parent’s rights as they are under the influence of globally dominated peer power. Unfortunately , when they grow up children do not listen to their

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as they find listening to their

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more attractive. From my perspective, if we want to find

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a solution

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to

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problem not only

parents

but

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governments should take some action . First of all,

parents

can avoid

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coincidence by having benign conversations with their children rather than making them feel like

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less of a person.

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, teachers should be patient and have empathy toward their students .

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theme at schools.

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it will be much better if students will talk about their problems and suggest some alternatives for us to listen

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In a nutshell , the adverse

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of teen

behavior

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behaviour

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because of the lack of attention from their

parents

and pedagogues , we can avoid

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issue by listening to

problems

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of

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young generation.