The maps demonstrate the development of Islip town center from the present to the future.

The maps demonstrate the development of Islip town center from the present to the future.
The maps demonstrate the development of Islip
town
center
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from the present to the future.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
town
will be projected to many significant changes. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are the appearance, renovations, relocations, and construction of new facilities.
In contrast
, the Southern part of the
town
will be kept it is. At present, the main
road
runs through the
town
from West to East for residents to visit the shops on both sides.
This
road
has two turns, one allows people to the school in the Southwest and the other to the
park
in the Southeast.
While
a big area is built for housing between the school and the
park
in the South, another zone is the countryside on the top of the
town
. Looking at the second map, we can see that the government will plan to expand the main
road
around Islip
town
to construct a dual carriageway by destroying the countryside. In the middle, the main
road
is forecasted to be pedestrianized which faces a bus station, shopping
center
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, car
park
, new housing on the top, and chain shops on the bottom will stay unchanged.
In contrast
, there will be no change in
school
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and housing in the south of the map.
Lastly
, the
park
is projected to be smaller to introduce new housing adjacent to it.
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