The maps demonstrate the development of Islip town center from the present to the future.
The maps demonstrate the development of Islip
town
center
from the present to the future.
Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, it is clear that
the town
will be projected to many significant changes. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are the appearance, renovations, relocations, and construction of new facilities. In contrast
, the Southern part of the town
will be kept it is.
At present, the main road
runs through the town
from West to East for residents to visit the shops on both sides. This
road
has two turns, one allows people to the school in the Southwest and the other to the park
in the Southeast. While
a big area is built for housing between the school and the park
in the South, another zone is the countryside on the top of the town
.
Looking at the second map, we can see that the government will plan to expand the main road
around Islip town
to construct a dual carriageway by destroying the countryside. In the middle, the main road
is forecasted to be pedestrianized which faces a bus station, shopping center
, car Change the spelling
centre
park
, new housing on the top, and chain shops on the bottom will stay unchanged. In contrast
, there will be no change in school
and housing in the south of the map. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Lastly
, the park
is projected to be smaller to introduce new housing adjacent to it.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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