Rich countries are getting richer and poor countries are getting poorer. What are the causes? What could be done to solve this problem?

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true fact that
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nowadays the developed
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richer as they have resources and money together .
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,
due to
less knowledge and materials , underdeveloped and developing
nations
stay poor for a
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few decades . In
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the first and foremost point that richer
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new gadget .Needless to say ,
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lifestyle and view of looking and noticing
things
are totally different as they always set one target and aim to achieve it .
Whereas
, poor
nations
have fewer resources of information and knowledge about
things
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just set their limits of thinking and have one particular boundary that they never close
while
doing something different .
Hence
, these are the few
things
which make a huge difference between poor and richer
countries
.
Although
,
this
can be solved with the help of developed
countries
by providing some support and financial help .
Firstly
, rich
nations
have to introduce new
things
to poor
nations
so that these people change and cross the boundaries to achieve something unique and different to the world .
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this
, richer
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that poor
nations
can afford the fee of high certificates
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poor
countries
conditions change . In conclusion ,
although
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more power as compared to underdeveloped and developing
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial assistance
  • technological assistance
  • economic gap
  • basic needs
  • healthcare
  • education
  • infrastructure
  • global stability
  • diplomatic relations
  • global cooperation
  • dependency
  • self-sufficiency
  • strings attached
  • political decisions
  • economic decisions
  • sovereignty
  • tension
  • mismanagement
  • corruption
  • intended purpose
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