You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write the letter to the course tutor. In your letter: -Describe your situation -Explain why you cannot continue at this time -Say what action you would like to do
Dear Sir,
I am Navneet Kaur,
first-year
student Add an article
a first-year
of
the Business course. I am writing Change preposition
in
this
letter to inform you that I want to withdraw my name from this
course. I have a full-time job at Tim Hortons as a supervisor due to
which I am unable to concentrate on my studies.
Unfortunately, the assistant manager of my store is not in town for the coming 3 months, thus
, I have been asked to handle her duties. Unfortunately, I need to help them because I need money for the treatment of my mother, she is in hospital. Lack of time would be a major issue for me, thus
, I decided to take this
course in the following semester.
I would be obliged if you could help me to get a refund of my fee or you can ask the manager to send this
to my account as student credits. Therefore
, I would be able to take admission again in the coming semester.
I would really appreciate your help.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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coherence cohesion
Your letter is well-structured and addresses all key points required by the task. However, consider breaking down complex information into shorter sentences for enhanced clarity.
task achievement
You could expand slightly on your job responsibilities at Tim Hortons for a fuller picture, though this is a minor point.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are formal and appropriate for the context.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is polite and professional throughout the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite