The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
There is no denying that there are more and more
people
who prefer to travel abroad. The table selected five
continents
to describe the changes in
people
who went on international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
First,
in 1990 there were 448.9 million
people
who travelled abroad in total, and the travelling number stably increase to 2005. One of the most popular
continents
was
Europe
. The table indicated that
Europe
was becoming more and more popular in these five
continents
. There are more than half of the
people
who would like to visit
Europe
.
Second,
before 2000 America was the second most popular country where the community went.
However
, the number was declined from 2000 to 2005.
Due to
the decline in America, Asia and the Pacific became the second most popular continent where communities travelled. The traveller number in Asia and the Pacific increased, especially from 1995 to 2000. The growth figure was two times more than from 1990 to 1995.
Finally
, Africa was always the third most popular in these five
continents
, and the figure grew slowly. The most unpopular continent was the Middle East, and it was always the fourth in the table, and the growth of figure was the most slowly compared with
Europe
, Asia and Pacific and Africa.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.

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  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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