A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Prabhleen, Hope you are doing great! I know you are visiting Rishikesh first time for a camping holiday

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summer. So, I wanted to offer you a few tips and recommendations before you leave. The place is known for spirituality and nature, the town has a freshwater lake surrounded by lush green hills.

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, there are a few sand beaches nearby the river which could be a perfect spot to set up a camp. You can expect a lot of heat because it is the peak hot season when you are expecting to be in Rishikesh.

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, the meals they serve in the restaurants of the town are completely vegan, so you must think through them before leaving for the adventure. I would love to join you for

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camping adventure.

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, my upcoming two weeks are occupied with my office responsibilities.

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, I would be able to join you if you are willing to extend the plan to the next month. Take care and stay well! Warm Regards, Madhur Bathla

madhur.bathlaFri May 19 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
mutual interests

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