The charts below show local government expenditure in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate various expenses made by local government in different fields in the years 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is clear from the data that in both periods education was the one with the highest segment and the other with the least.
Moreover
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, interest and borrowing have shown a slight increase when compared to 2015 and there were no noticeable changes in other segments. The Educational sector accounted for 24% in 2010 but decreased by 3% in 2015.when coming to the healthcare sector it was 21% and in 2015 it showed a slight decrease of 1%.
However
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, at the beginning defence was having 17% of expenses but
at the end
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, it decreases to 14%.
Apart from
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this
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, other sectors like transport, culture and leisure showed 3% and 2% in 2010 but decreased by 1%. Welfare was only 8% in the starting period but
initially
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, it rose to 13%.In 2010 interest on borrowings was only 5% but in the end, it increased by 5%.
while
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pensions remained the same.
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