Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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's life. The most remarkable is undoubtedly

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what community is talking to each other with a mobile phone or what they are doing by watching security cameras. Surely,

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pros and cons. I believe that advantageous conditions are more useful rather than disadvantageous cases. The subject will be examined in

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essay. On the one hand, there are two compelling arguments about the disadvantages of the following

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to privacy and not to being accepted.

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violation of privacy between public or

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workers.

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the authorities who are responsible for us are sending

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for top secret topics like attacking areas or the regulations of

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, they may be listened

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others.

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, despite knowing well that

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are living freely in a free world,

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being tracked might disturb humankind.

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, when a youngster would like to go to the cinema without permission from his family, the family can follow conveniently where their child will go

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or with who is.

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, most

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do not prefer to be listened to or followed by one.

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, certainly, many beneficial ideas can assert to

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alleviate the rate of perpetration or like to watch alone babies at

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home. Simply, thanks to ubiquitous security cameras,

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can be pursued every time. To illustrate, a thief cannot steal a car in

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outskirt even!

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, working parents desire to be informed about their children when they are alone or with a babysitter in the home. To give an example, unfortunately, it is known well that some babysitters may give rise to some bad

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in children as parents cannot keep up with them in the work offices. In conclusion, compared to the disadvantages, I am of the opinion that it is more useful to monitor by security cameras or

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listened to.