Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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pros and cons. I believe that advantageous conditions are more useful rather than disadvantageous cases. The subject will be examined in Correct your spelling
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Also
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In conclusion, compared to the disadvantages, I am of the opinion that it is more useful to monitor by security cameras or Replace the word
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