The charts below show local government expenditure in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show local government expenditure in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie charts describe changes amongst rival government expenditures which are 9 departments in the

years

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2000 and 2010.

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, there were some small changes in some groups

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not a major difference between these certain

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. with the exception of the Internet on borrowing and welfare, had slightly increased percentage but, Transport had decreased. specifically looking at the popularity in both

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. First of all, Education was the most popular 24% and 21%,

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however

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decreased

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by 3

% When coming to Healthcare 21%, 20% and Pensions 19% respectively in both

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. These were steadily going on for over 5

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In addition

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, the Internet on borrowing had grown up from 8% to 13% in 2015.

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While

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some industries had been expanding, Transport had slightly gone down from 3% to 1% unfortunately. ,

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culture and leisure and others had not much improvement because they only had 1% in certain

years

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

150 words

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