Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, more and more people want to do
sport
to maintain their health condition. Use synonyms
Certain
community assumes that there Add an article
The certain
is
more upsides Change the verb form
are
in
the Change preposition
to
groups
types of Change to a genitive case
group's
groups'
sport
, Use synonyms
lile
basketball, Correct your spelling
like
while
others suggest that activities with only one participant, Linking Words
for example
running, is the best Linking Words
choise
. Correct your spelling
choice
This
essay agrees that social-connected Linking Words
sports
Use synonyms
is
better, in order to develop some social skills, but other group thinks that it leads to discrimination from Change the verb form
are
others
members of Correct quantifier usage
other
Use synonyms
team
.
Add an article
the team
Individual
has Add an article
An individual
The individual
opportunity
to improve Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
his
Correct pronoun usage
their
communications
during Fix the agreement mistake
communication
team
Use synonyms
sport
Use synonyms
session
. Sometimes, group Fix the agreement mistake
sessions
sports
create a number of Use synonyms
discusions
to generate the best tactic or special approach for the Correct your spelling
discussions
team
. It leads to constant chats Use synonyms
berween
participants, which can help to develop the ability to defend or introduce your opinion. Correct your spelling
between
For example
, teachers in Linking Words
the
Norway's school outline that members of their local football Correct article usage
apply
team
, as a rule, Use synonyms
more
social and open than other students.
Add a missing verb
are more
On the other hand
, some people say that teammates can destroy Linking Words
Correct article usage
a persons
persons
Change noun form
person's
interes
Correct your spelling
interest
to
Change preposition
in
sport
, by Use synonyms
criticise
him for weak skills. Their Change the verb form
criticising
opinin
Correct your spelling
opinion
based
on the fact that Add a missing verb
is based
sportsman
will not rely on Fix the agreement mistake
sportsmen
others
words and will achieve more by doing solo Change noun form
others'
other's
sports
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, conflicts and Linking Words
bulling
are common social issues, it Correct your spelling
bullying
is not depends
Change the verb form
does not depend
of
Change preposition
on
sport
and surrounds students everywhere, Use synonyms
individual
has to know how to protect Add an article
an individual
the individual
himself
and minimalize conflict situations and the best tutor is Correct pronoun usage
themselves
certain
Correct article usage
a certain
socium
, so Correct your spelling
social
this
essay Linking Words
suggest
that group Change the verb form
suggests
sports
Use synonyms
is
more beneficial. Change the verb form
are
For instance
, the Linking Words
last
sociological research found Linking Words
out
that minors, which are Change preposition
apply
perticipate
in the Correct your spelling
participate
participated
Use synonyms
sport
Change the noun form
sports
team
better aware Use synonyms
how
to Change preposition
of how
sovle
local misunderstandings.
In conclusion, if Correct your spelling
solve
individual
is ready for possible misunderstandings in the collective, in Add an article
the individual
an individual
this
Linking Words
case
Add the comma(s)
,case
Use synonyms
sport
activities, Change the noun form
sports
where
involved 2 or more people, have more positive consequences for Correct word choice
that
person
Correct article usage
a person
that
solo ones.Correct word choice
than
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