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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, more and more people want to do
sport
 to maintain their health condition.
Certain
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 community assumes that there
is
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are
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 more upsides
in
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 the
groups
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group's
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 types of
sport
,
lile
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like
 basketball,
while
 others suggest that activities with only one participant,
for example
 running, is the best
choise
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choice
.
This
 essay agrees that social-connected
sports
is
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 better, in order to develop some social skills, but other group thinks that it leads to discrimination from
others
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 members of
team
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the team
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.
Individual
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An individual
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 has
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to improve
his
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their
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communications
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communication
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 during
team
sport
session
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sessions
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. Sometimes, group
sports
 create a number of
discusions
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discussions
 to generate the best tactic or special approach for the
team
. It leads to constant chats
berween
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between
 participants, which can help to develop the ability to defend or introduce your opinion.
For example
, teachers in
the
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Norway's school outline that members of their local football
team
, as a rule,
more
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are more
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 social and open than other students.
On the other hand
, some people say that teammates can destroy
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a persons
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persons
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person's
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interes
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interest
to
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in
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sport
, by
criticise
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criticising
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 him for weak skills. Their
opinin
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opinion
based
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is based
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 on the fact that
sportsman
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sportsmen
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 will not rely on
others
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others'
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 words and will achieve more by doing solo
sports
.
Nevertheless
, conflicts and
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bullying
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 are common social issues, it
is not depends
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of
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on
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sport
 and surrounds students everywhere,
individual
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an individual
the individual
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 has to know how to protect
himself
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themselves
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 and minimalize conflict situations and the best tutor is
certain
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a certain
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socium
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social
, so
this
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suggest
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 that group
sports
is
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are
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 more beneficial.
For instance
, the
last
 sociological research found
out
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that minors, which are
perticipate
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participate
participated
 in the
sport
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sports
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team
 better aware
how
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of how
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 to
sovle
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solve
 local misunderstandings. In conclusion, if
individual
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the individual
an individual
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 is ready for possible misunderstandings in the collective, in
this
case
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sport
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sports
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 activities,
where
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that
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 involved 2 or more people, have more positive consequences for
person
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a person
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that
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than
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 solo ones.
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