Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Many animal species face the risk of extinction, which will reduce the diversity of creatures and

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endanger

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living environment. There is no denying that human is the main reason that causes animal extinctions and there are many efforts that people can make to solve

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problem. First of all,

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population growth may contribute to animal annihilation. As the population

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, cities are expanding to rural areas to meet people’s need of living. When rural areas or wild places that have not been developed yet like forests and river bands begin to

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, animal habitats are

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destroyed, forcing the animals that lived in the environments to find either

a new habitats

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or to extinct.

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, animals’ economic values are

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the cause of their extinction.

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, the increasing demand and over-hunting of fish for consuming, including tuna and salmon, results

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their decreasing population.

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, illegal hunting for precious animal organs

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as rhino horns can

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be credited to the cause of

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animals

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destructions

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destruction

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. These two reasons directly lead to animals’

annihilations

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and should be improved through actions. To solve the problem, many methods can be applied. I believe that legislation is the most effective solution. When an animal protection law is legislated,

over-hunting

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and illegal hunting can all be prohibited with penalties applied to violators.

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, when the laws require city

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to consider

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environmental

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protection, some natural habitats may be conserved owing to their importance for creatures. In conclusion, given that many

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behaviors

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contribute to

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animals

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extinctions, people need to take responsibility and have

actions

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to reduce the number of animals that are directly or indirectly killed by human activities.