Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that it is not wrong if you are fun of doing activities regularly
while
others can not live without changing. In
this
essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my own opinion. On the one hand, if we do everything regularly,
as a result
, it helps us to be more organized. Our life starts being managed
due to
our routine and the way we are living.
For instance
, doing exercise without stopping, helps you to be fit and healthy. Other good habits like reading, healthy eating and meditation were built on regularly practising.
Finally
, we can build self-discipline by forcing ourselves to do things cyclically. From their younger age, everybody used to learn new skills in
this
way.
On the other hand
, I believe that doing something new with our life scenery results in to be our better version day by day or year by year. As days go and seasons change we
also
cannot remain unchanged. As a being older our behaviour and interest
also
change.
Furthermore
, we don't become friends with someone who was close to us in our childhood. The reason is that we are changed enough. If we don't do changes, how we can know things which will be better for us? We should try new subjects, tastes, travels and everything we can.
As a result
, we can create new opportunities. In conclusion,
while
others are building self-discipline by doing identical activities, I believe that we can not rebuild our best version without new experiences
Submitted by sevaraalijonovna on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
What to do next:
Look at other essays: