There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there

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Dear Prm, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.It's been a long since we have had the time to

catch-up

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and reminisced the things.I am writing

this

letter to invite you to the traditional party in

India

. Actually, the

Diwali

festival is in June and I know you told me once that you want to attend a

Diwali

party in

India

.You remember when I was in

India

and I arranged a small get-together for

this

occasion and you liked it so much.

Then

I described that

India

has the best

Diwali

parties.You should go there and

then

you agreed .Anyways,I think

this

will be the perfect time for you to come to my place , to enjoy the party and my company.

Moreover

Diwali

is a day when our lord came back to his home after spending 14 years in a forest.People were thrilled and lighting up oil lamps for his homecoming.In present as well,We enjoy

this

day with great enthusiasm and energy .I'm sure that you will definitely like it.There will be plenty of food ,fireworks, music and dance and I know you love all

this

stuff. I would love you to come and join

this

festival .I can't wait to meet you again. Say hello to Uncle and Aunt, Your close friend, Any

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

220 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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