Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?

Nowadays, some people consider getting married and having
children
is a hard decision to make.
While
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others would argue that the best
age
to take
this
step is in the twenties
age
.
However
, I partly agree with them I strongly support those who choose to wait until their
thirties
. In
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I am going to explain my point of view with clear examples.
To begin
with, the benefits of waiting until the
thirties
age
.
Firstly
,
youth
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will have enough time to save more money so they can get a better life and secure the future for their
children
,
for example
, in developing countries like Egypt marriage costs too
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couples have to build or rent their own home and arrange all furniture.
Therefore
they spend years working to get
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money they need for
marraige
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marriage
.
Secondly
, finding a partner is
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crucial
for instance
, if a man or a woman is harry in taking
this
decision in
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twenties
age
and
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the wrong one, they would regret the rest of their life.
Therefore
, it is better to wait until they get the perfect partner.
Finally
, the more people get older the more they get wise so they can afford
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children
childern
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children
and
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mothers and fathers
On the other hand
, those who advocate the opposite point of view and show the negative side of waiting until
thirties
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age
would say that we should be close to our
children
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age
and
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not delay
this
happiness of having
family
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a family
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.
For instance
, people in the countryside of Egypt force their sons to get
marry
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in
the
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twenties
age
, they claim that they cannot wait until they see their grandsons.
In addition
, sometimes waiting
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thirties
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to get married would consider wasting of time if we do have love
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partner
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a partner
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and
the
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enough money to have a family. In conclusion,
this
trend has both positive and negative
side
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,
however
, I would say that from my own
experience
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we should not be harry and the perfect
age
to get married and have
children
is the
thirties
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • matrimonial timing
  • fertility issues
  • career-oriented
  • financial security
  • societal norms
  • generational divide
  • personal fulfillment
  • personality development
  • biological clock
  • extended adolescence
  • family planning
  • child rearing
  • socioeconomic factors
  • traditional milestones
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