Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?
Nowadays, some people consider getting married and having
children
is a hard decision to make. While
,
others would argue that the best Remove the comma
apply
age
to take this
step is in the twenties age
. However
, I partly agree with them I strongly support those who choose to wait until their thirties
. In this
essay
I am going to explain my point of view with clear examples.
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,essay
To begin
with, the benefits of waiting until the thirties
age
. Firstly
, youth
will have enough time to save more money so they can get a better life and secure the future for their Correct article usage
the youth
children
, for example
, in developing countries like Egypt marriage costs too much
couples have to build or rent their own home and arrange all furniture. Change the quantifier
many
Therefore
they spend years working to get they
money they need for Correct your spelling
the
marraige
. Correct your spelling
marriage
Secondly
, finding a partner is a
crucial Change the article
apply
for instance
, if a man or a woman is harry in taking this
decision in the
twenties Change the word
their
age
and choose
the wrong one, they would regret the rest of their life. Correct subject-verb agreement
chooses
Therefore
, it is better to wait until they get the perfect partner. Finally
, the more people get older the more they get wise so they can afford raising
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to raise
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children
childern
and Correct your spelling
children
being
mothers and fathers
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be
On the other hand
, those who advocate the opposite point of view and show the negative side of waiting until thirties
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our thirties
age
would say that we should be close to our children
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children's
age
and do
not delay Unnecessary verb
apply
this
happiness of having family
. Add an article
a family
For instance
, people in the countryside of Egypt force their sons to get marry
in Change the form of the verb
married
the
twenties Change the word
their
age
, they claim that they cannot wait until they see their grandsons. In addition
, sometimes waiting to
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in
thirties
to get married would consider wasting of time if we do have love Correct article usage
the thirties
with
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for
partner
and Correct article usage
a partner
the
enough money to have a family.
In conclusion, Remove the article
apply
this
trend has both positive and negative side
, Fix the agreement mistake
sides
however
, I would say that from my own experience
we should not be harry and the perfect Add a comma
,experience
age
to get married and have children
is the thirties
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