Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?

Nowadays, some people consider getting married and having

children

is a hard decision to make.

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others would argue that the best

age

to take

this

step is in the twenties

age

.

However

, I partly agree with them I strongly support those who choose to wait until their

thirties

. In

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I am going to explain my point of view with clear examples.

To begin

with, the benefits of waiting until the

thirties

age

.

Firstly

,

youth

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will have enough time to save more money so they can get a better life and secure the future for their

children

,

for example

, in developing countries like Egypt marriage costs too

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couples have to build or rent their own home and arrange all furniture.

Therefore

they spend years working to get

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money they need for

marraige

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marriage

.

Secondly

, finding a partner is

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crucial

for instance

, if a man or a woman is harry in taking

this

decision in

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twenties

age

and

choose

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the wrong one, they would regret the rest of their life.

Therefore

, it is better to wait until they get the perfect partner.

Finally

, the more people get older the more they get wise so they can afford

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children

childern

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children

and

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mothers and fathers

On the other hand

, those who advocate the opposite point of view and show the negative side of waiting until

thirties

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our thirties

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age

would say that we should be close to our

children

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age

and

do

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not delay

this

happiness of having

family

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a family

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.

For instance

, people in the countryside of Egypt force their sons to get

marry

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married

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in

the

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twenties

age

, they claim that they cannot wait until they see their grandsons.

In addition

, sometimes waiting

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thirties

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the thirties

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to get married would consider wasting of time if we do have love

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partner

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and

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enough money to have a family. In conclusion,

this

trend has both positive and negative

side

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,

however

, I would say that from my own

experience

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we should not be harry and the perfect

age

to get married and have

children

is the

thirties

.