QUESTION In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantage outweighs the disadvantage.
The idea of packaging food and drinks loss into different Shapes and sizes of spoons,cups and plates for use. These items are sent to the market to be sold to the public .
have
become a global practice. Countries around the world now embraced the use of disposable Correct subject-verb agreement
has
plastics
for this
purpose. Although
this
practice has been widely accepted,itAdd the comma(s)
, however,
however
has some shortfalls.This
essay will discuss how the advantages outweighs
the disadvantage.
On one hand, it is quite expensive to import materials used to produce these containers. Change the verb form
outweigh
For
instance
the Add a comma
,instance
plastics
for packaging malt drinks are imported from Germany. They are shipped into this
country hence
they have to pass through some clearing processes before the
are delivered to the company for use. Correct your spelling
they
Secondly
Add a comma
,Secondly
whereas
the disposable packs were supposed to enhance the quality of the products, damages to the plastics
will result in spillage of its contents and devalue the products. This
also
result
Change the verb form
results
to
Change preposition
in
Correct article usage
the
to
the Change preposition
of
rganization
.
Correct your spelling
organisation
On the other hand
, although
the
Correct article usage
apply
plastics
are expensive,they are very much reliable because they are sealed to protect and preserve the contents thereby making them fit for consumption without contamination. For instance
,a plastic plate can be used to package food or drink from one country to the
another. The containers can Correct article usage
apply
also
be recycled and used for other purposes. For example
, a company in Nigeria collects plastic containers,wash
,Correct subject-verb agreement
washes
dry
and Replace the word
dries
grind
them into powder to remouldCorrect subject-verb agreement
grinds
Correct pronoun usage
them
To sum up
,the benefits of using plastics
for food and drinks outweighs
Correct subject-verb agreement
outweigh
it's
demerits. Replace the word
its
However
,the process of importation maybe
expensive,Correct your spelling
may be
the
items remain useful. They are recycled and reused for other purposes.Correct word choice
but the
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