QUESTION In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantage outweighs the disadvantage.

The idea of packaging food and drinks
have
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become a global practice. Countries around the world now embraced the use of disposable
plastics
for
this
purpose.
Although
this
practice has been widely accepted,it
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however
has some shortfalls.
This
essay will discuss how the advantages
outweighs
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the disadvantage. On one hand, it is quite expensive to import materials used to produce these containers.
For
instance
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the
plastics
for packaging malt drinks are imported from Germany. They are shipped into
this
country
hence
they have to pass through some clearing processes before
the
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are delivered to the company for use.
Secondly
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whereas
the disposable packs were supposed to enhance the quality of the products, damages to the
plastics
will result in spillage of its contents and devalue the products.
This
also
result
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to
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loss
to
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the
rganization
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organisation
.
On the other hand
,
although
the
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plastics
are expensive,they are very much reliable because they are sealed to protect and preserve the contents thereby making them fit for consumption without contamination.
For instance
,a plastic plate can be used to package food or drink from one country to
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another. The containers can
also
be recycled and used for other purposes.
For example
, a company in Nigeria collects plastic containers,
wash
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washes
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,
dry
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and
grind
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them into powder to remould
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into different Shapes and sizes of spoons,cups and plates for use. These items are sent to the market to be sold to the public .
To sum up
,the benefits of using
plastics
for food and drinks
outweighs
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it's
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demerits.
However
,the process of importation
maybe
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may be
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expensive,
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but the
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items remain useful. They are recycled and reused for other purposes.
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