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QUESTION In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantage outweighs the disadvantage.

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The idea of packaging food and drinks
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 become a global practice. Countries around the world now embraced the use of disposable
plastics
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 for
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 purpose.
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this
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 practice has been widely accepted,it
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however
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 has some shortfalls.
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outweighs
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 the disadvantage. On one hand, it is quite expensive to import materials used to produce these containers.
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instance
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 the
plastics
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 for packaging malt drinks are imported from Germany. They are shipped into
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 country
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 they have to pass through some clearing processes before
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 are delivered to the company for use.
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Secondly
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whereas
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 the disposable packs were supposed to enhance the quality of the products, damages to the
plastics
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 will result in spillage of its contents and devalue the products.
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also
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result
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to
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loss
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 the
rganization
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organisation
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,
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the
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plastics
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 are expensive,they are very much reliable because they are sealed to protect and preserve the contents thereby making them fit for consumption without contamination.
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,a plastic plate can be used to package food or drink from one country to
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another. The containers can
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 be recycled and used for other purposes.
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, a company in Nigeria collects plastic containers,
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washes
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,
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 and
grind
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grinds
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 them into powder to remould
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into different Shapes and sizes of spoons,cups and plates for use. These items are sent to the market to be sold to the public .
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,the benefits of using
plastics
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 for food and drinks
outweighs
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it's
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 demerits.
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,the process of importation
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may be
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 expensive,
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but the
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 items remain useful. They are recycled and reused for other purposes.

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