You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In recent days the number of folks dedicated to particular
hobbies
has decreased , I believe that this
is due to
their busy lifestyles as well as
the lack of knowledge of how important adopting a hobby could be , that said , this
comes with negative impacts on both the society and on an individual scale , this
essay will present the causes and the further
consequences of this
dilemma .
To begin
with , the main reasons responsible for this
issue are,first , most people
nowadays have huge workloads forcing them to neglect any other un-work related life manners that are not urgent , and hobbies
are no exception , for instance
, working mothers barely have the time
to do chores at home and spend time
their children , therefore
, hobbies
have no time
in their routine, second , people
often look at activities done for pleasure as unnecessary , the fact is , they're anything but , this
comes from the notion that hobbies
are ''for the old generation '' and younger people
like to spend their free time
on other stuff regarded as entertaining these days such
as watching films .
second , this
epidemic , has some negative impacts on both personal and public levels , as being devoted to hobbies
takes away people
's attention from their stressful work life and channels it to something else that becomes a side job that can offer them relaxation and raise their self-esteem and connect them with other people
outside workspace, like playing football weekly for example
, with these upsides said , if people
were not to have a hobby it could make the community less related to each other and individuals can get mentally ill because of the stress faced every day that is
not relieved by anyway.
To sum up
, the many tasks people
have these days and the unawareness of how crucial devotion to a hobby is made people
stop having hobbies
performed on a regular basis ,moreover
, it can affect bonds within society and individuals can get burned out from the mush responsibilities.Submitted by ahmadzm2004 on
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