You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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In recent days the number of folks dedicated to particular
hobbies
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has decreased , I believe that
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is
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their busy lifestyles
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the lack of knowledge of how important adopting a hobby could be , that said ,
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comes with negative impacts on both the society and on an individual scale ,
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essay will present the causes and the
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consequences of
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dilemma .
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with , the main reasons responsible for
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issue are,first , most
people
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nowadays have huge workloads forcing them to neglect any other un-work related life manners that are not urgent , and
hobbies
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are no exception ,
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, working mothers barely have the
time
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to do chores at home and spend
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their children ,
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,
hobbies
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have no
time
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in their routine, second ,
people
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often look at activities done for pleasure as unnecessary , the fact is , they're anything but ,
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comes from the notion that
hobbies
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are ''for the old generation '' and younger
people
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like to spend their free
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on other stuff regarded as entertaining these days
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as watching films . second ,
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epidemic , has some negative impacts on both personal and public levels , as being devoted to
hobbies
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takes away
people
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's attention from their stressful work life and channels it to something else that becomes a side job that can offer them relaxation and raise their self-esteem and connect them with other
people
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outside workspace, like playing football weekly
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, with these upsides said , if
people
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were not to have a hobby it could make the community less related to each other and individuals can get mentally ill because of the stress faced every day
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not relieved by anyway.
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, the many tasks
people
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have these days and the unawareness of how crucial devotion to a hobby is made
people
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stop having
hobbies
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performed on a regular basis ,
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, it can affect bonds within society and individuals can get burned out from the mush responsibilities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deprive
  • leisure activities
  • harmful impacts
  • relieve stress
  • enhance productivity
  • boost creativity
  • foster social interactions
  • escape from daily routines
  • pursue one's interests
  • balance work and personal life
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