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Some people think that fittest and strongest individuals and the team can achieve success in sports, while others believe that success depends on mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #individuals #team #success #sports #attitude
Modern society has been facing a dramatic surge in the among of people who
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 allow violate mental
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attitudes
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.
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Discipline
 is an issue that generates heated debates with supporters maintaining that
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regard
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the team
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team
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. Some experts tend to ascertain that strict discipline mainly
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influences
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team work
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.
This
 claim resonates with me to some extent. I believe that both
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productive
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 to
team
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the team
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. The first and foremost why I reckon that
team
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teams
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 and
individual
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individuals
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 can attain success are rooted in the fact that strong education and discipline give
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 influence. As
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 Omarov Dastan trainer in football always
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 working and
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 with
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 group.
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 that Dastan is
famous
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a famous
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 trainer . When he was
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 teenage experience Dastan matured and improved their drawbacks with all of
team
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the team
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 . He rarely
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 football solo , often
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given
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prefer
 to group play.
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Furthermore
, it is worth
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 that sometimes strict
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discipline
 can violate mental health . Another significant reason how
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 achieve
succsess
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success
 it is depends on
psycological
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psychological
 state. To clarify Arystan
team
 always improves their mistakes with experts and
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.
likewise
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 the time manage more comfortable than
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. Every after game Arystan people
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 place a
pirty
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party
. Despite the prominent arguments in
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 of
team
achiement
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achievement
, I admit that strong , fittest people
outweight
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outweigh
 mental attitude.
To conclude
 , I strongly believe that
team
 attain have significant
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 with strong disciplines in
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teams
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 or groups.
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