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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: -Give details of the job -Explain why it is important to you - Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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Dear Mr Sam Tehranchi I hope everything is great and you have been well. I still remember your sense of commitment to your students. I am writing
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 letter to inform you that, I am trying to get a job in a very famous architecture
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 in Shiraz.
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, the job is related to architecture and urban design and I suppose to work in the position of civil engineer draft person. In
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 way because of that place and in terms of my abilities on those criteria it seemed I am the right person for that
office
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.
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, that
office
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 has many types of facilities and possibilities for architects and engineers. Because of
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 it is important for me to attend the team of that
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, I would really be grateful if you could prepare a recommendation letter for me to illustrate and explain my capacity in design.
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, I do appreciate it if it is mentioned how much I adore architecture and creating multi-functional buildings. Thank you in advance for your help. Sincerely yours, Kambiz Pirzad

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