Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because univerity education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since

university

students

,

instead

of the public, mainly gain advantages from the

education

, it is argued that they should take

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full responsibility

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their studying fees. In my view, I slightly disagree with

this

argument. During

university

life,

students

undoubtedly make contributions to the community. First of all,

students

who do not receive salaries from the placement get involved in the public health service without asking

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returns.

For example

, medical undergraduates may have to volunteer in

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public hospitals which helps to alleviate the burden of the health system.

Furthermore

, providing

education

fee

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to

university

pupils ensures that the

overall

education

level in the country is guaranteed . If they do not receive

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education

, they may not be able to apply the professional and specific knowledge in their future careers.

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,

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community service may be negatively affected. Despite

students

' contributions to society, they, compared with the public, may mostly be benefited from

university

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To begin

with,

students

may not cherish the opportunities of studying in college if they do not have the responsibility to pay for it.

For instance

, those who simply aim for graduation may not put any

efforts

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in

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learning and studying.

As a result

, they may turn out to be a ‘couch

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’ staying at home during the day so the knowledge they learnt in previous schools has has no positive

influences

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on society. In conclusion,

although

some graduates may not play a role in the public system,

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of them in contributing to the whole community should not be neglected.

Thus

, it is reasonable that their

education

fee is

subsitized

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subsidised

by

university

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.