Environment problems such as pollution and climate variations are incresing nowadays. The goverments have taken some measures at problem be solved.?

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climate change and various problems in the environment are increasing today. Governments are taking some measures at the global level,but it is difficult to
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eliminate
them .
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suggest that the biggest
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why global measures have failed is that the grow up
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world is shying abroad from the
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it needs to experience,for
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it did to the environment in the colonial commercial revolution times. On
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hand
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if we need to see a real positives change the developed world has to do
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more
than the developing world.
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it can not an equal role. Another factor to consider is providing wealth and
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technology
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renewable
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origin of energy to the developing and the least industrial countries. It is true that
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enivorment
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environment
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with each other . Let the environment always take a back seat to
development
.
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and brought us to our current. May support the view that sustainable
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is the
development
of responding to modern requirements without harming the
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environment
. On the
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it can be seen clearly, why the steps taken so far have failed to save the
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environment
,
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the time has come to do some soul-searching and take
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steps
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the
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environment
to put is simply the relationship between human life and plant life and it
enivornment
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environment
are all interdependent.
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