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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cOst. Write at least

#seminar #country #person #charge #information #dates #program #accommodation #cost
Dear Mr Smith, I am Harvey, studying at Sheffield Hallam University. I am writing to you with regard
about
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 seeking information related to
upcoming
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the upcoming
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 arts
seminar
 which would be held in Dubai.
Firstly
, I saw a notice on a
notice-board
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noticeboard
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 that our university organise
foreign
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a foreign
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seminar
 for
one-week
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one week
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 on art and craft. I am really interested in
this
seminar
 and would like to attend. Moving on, you are the
incharge
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in charge
in-charge
 of
this
seminar
. I requested you to please provide me
all
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 the information related to
this
seminar
 namely
dates
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the dates
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 and the programs covered in
this
seminar
.
Moreover
,
also
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university
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the university
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 or students
have
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who have
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 to arrange on it
own
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their own
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 and the total cost of
this
seminar
 so that I manage each and every thing
accordingly
. I would
really
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 thankful to you in advance. I am looking forward
hearing
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to hearing
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 from you.
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Your
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 Faithfully, Harvey
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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