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Conversations about talents are following mankind from the eldest times. Even in the ancient Greek there were debate about, are talented people more successful in society?

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Conversations about talents are following mankind from the eldest times. Even in
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ancient
Greek
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 there
were
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debate
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a debate
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 about, are talented
people
 more successful in society
?
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 And of course, there are many opinions too,
someone
think
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 that man without can not reach high achievements, other one think oppositely that even human without any
talent
 can make great developments. So who is right? It is time to discuss
this
 thing. To know - who is right, we must analyze both camps.
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first,
let's discuss
opinion
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 that without
talent
 you can not achieve anything. So, are talented
people
 more successful in society?
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The answer
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 is probably yes, but there are some thoughts that you must mind.
Firstly
,
talent
 does not mean that
people
 will be talented in every aspect of
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 life, man can be
genius
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 in physics, but absolutely
does
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not know how to cook. Second thing, even talented
people
 need some space, they must take education from somewhere, even wonder kids can not take lessons from the void. Now, let's see
other
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,
oppositely
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 side, some
people
 think, that even talentless
people
 can make
great
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a great
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 development.
However
, I do not want to break
someone
's pink glasses, but
this
 is not real. If you want to be famous for your achievement, you must have some talents, because you need knowledge, but before you reach your goals
someone
 can already make your ideas, that you tried to realize in the future. So,
at
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 the end, I think
talented
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 does not mean that you will be successful in your life
,
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 because there are a lot of things you must have to use your
talent
.
However
,
talent
 is something without
you
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which you
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 can not reach
high
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a high
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 spot
,
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 because if you do not have
talent
someone
 can already realize your ideas
to
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 real life.
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