Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is true that some countries own international success by building specialized

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to train top

athletes

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instead

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of providing sports

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that everyone can use.

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development has several advantages, the drawbacks may be far more significant. On the one hand, there can be some minor benefits of the

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built. One possible merit is that enough private spaces to practice. Mainly because

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allows the

athletes

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have

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place

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to do the

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exercise

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without making noise which can

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residents. Another beneficial effect could be that an owner may have

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. Mainly because building those

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can cost an amount of money

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the owner can create some fees for everyone when they come to playing sports.

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place for

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to train can have major disadvantages which overshadow these benefits. The most obvious drawback is that

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crucial of

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when the

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do practice. The reason for it is that some sports need their facility to practice, so if they do not have it, they might not complete the exercise well. Another demerit worth mentioning is

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losing the competition. Lacking

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facilities

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prevents the

athletes

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do not have enough

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familiar

of using it during

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training time,

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for the sport which

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its specialized facility.

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, they may lose the international competition. In conclusion, despite the

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erected

can have potential positives , the issues involved are of greater significance.