fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

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young individuals

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working in the agricultural fields. From my perspective,

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trend can stem from several causes,

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as unfavourable incomes and unappreciated positions in

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specific field.

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are two primary reasons why today's young

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do not choose the farming

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numerous opportunities for jobs that can help the youth earn high incomes

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individuals tend to opt for stable

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as technology

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and electrical engineering. In comparison to other industries, agriculture is unstable since the farmers have to rely on numerous factors

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as weather conditions or the yields of the crops. Another positive cause for

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trend is the general perception of

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that farming is not given weight in social valuation for a well-trained resident.

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, most of them gravitate toward occupations that can help them upgrade their social standing.

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, despite the above-mentioned reason, I hold the belief that

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should be inspired

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in the farming sector because

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will benefit both

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and themselves.

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, agriculture is undeniably one of the most essential factors to prevent the worldwide

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crisis.

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, thanks to the abundance of

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supply originating from the Mekong Delta.

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residents of Vietnam can have sufficient

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to survive and even sustain their high-quality living standards.

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, the youth can adapt to new technology that can help the farmer enhance productivity and create more well-produced agricultural products. In conclusion,

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incomes and low social status, today's

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reluctant to work in farming.

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, I suppose that the youth resident should be motivated to engage in agriculture since

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may help

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