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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study aboard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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There is no doubt that education strategies have changed over the years but, in recent years even the way
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 altered when compared to the old times. Gone are the times, were students apply for universities within their own homeland, now majorly teens prefer to do their higher studies in foreign lands.
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abroad will give an opportunity for a student to work and study at the same time.
Secondly
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In addition
, they will become more
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 after learning about different cultures. To illustrate, A Korean girl who is moving out of
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 Korea to North America, will come out of her comfort zone and earn more through part-time opportunities. She might
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 and heritage
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 of diverse people.
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, some would lose their own family values, in the process of creating a better bonding with their colleagues.
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 or problems
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 if they are unaware of the current country’s laws and regulations.
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 nationality is moving to Canada for her post-graduation, there is a high chance that she might change her basic values like not wearing shoes in apartments.
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 drugs which is quite popular
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 New York college grads. To
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 up, studying somewhere far from our homeland has its own benefits and drawbacks of its own like becoming optimistic
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 various cultures and views to falling for wrong guidance and forgetting our core values.
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 advisable to utilize every opportunity that we get
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 path to reach great heights.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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