The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Australians spend helping their children with four different activities . Use synonyms
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mothers are spent more Linking Words
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on child care than fathers .
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progenitors attend together . Next goes , homework females allocate 60 per Use synonyms
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males contribute only 10 per Linking Words
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. Playing games with progenitors are popular activity 70 per Use synonyms
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men are played more than women . More often both men and women prepare for bed their kid 50 per Add a comma
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